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Sherlock Fic - Semper Fidelis, Part Two
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Title: Semper Fidelis
Rating: Probably an R
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Violence, sex
Summary: Written for a kinkmeme prompt: Moriarty frames John and "Anthea" of betrayals which cause both of the Holmes brothers to cut them off. Cue BAMF!John and BAMF!"Anthea" doing their best to clear their names. Both het and slash; Mycroft/Anthea and John/Sherlock.


(Title page by [info]mabivia)

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Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight



This is great. I love BAMF!John. I can't wait for more! Hope those geniuses can start to figure things out now that the police survived.

*flails* BMAF!John is love! I do wonder if Anthea's gonna question him on his level of skill when all that is over. Poor Anthea though. And I knew something was up with her Blackberry! No wonder she's almost surgically attached to it. Looking forward to this and the next update of the republic of heaven~

Thanks! I always thought Anthea's Blackberry was more than it seemed.

This is excellent. I'm loving BAMF!John and BAMF!"Anthea". Mostly though, I like the idea of the Holmes brothers being unable to believe that someone would love them. Here's hoping they get some sense knocked into them.

Where's the rest of it!? :P

OH MY GOODNESS--I am so excited for more I'm not even sure I'll be able to sleep now (honestly, John is SO badass!) even though I really should.. You know I was all happy when I read the prompt for this fic, but when I started reading I got this sick, chest-kicked feeling and I love it because it is so IC!

I can totally see why both Mycroft and Sherlock would assume they were not able to be truly loved for who they are, and even how John is feeling...Communication, people! There needs to be some more of it.. but then this lovely fic wouldn't exist--and that simply would not do..

So carry on, you're breaking my heart and will hopefully fix it all better sometime soon (...you will, right? RIGHT?!)

:D

Thanks! And I'm afraid there will be some more heart-stomping before we get to the fixing...

I love this so much. Oh, BAMF!John and BAMF!Anthea *sighs happily* I can tell it's going to kill me waiting for updates ;)

Thanks! I've always loved writing badass!John, and I suspect I'm going to have as much fun with Anthea.

BADASS JOHN IS THE BEST KIND OF JOHN.

Why has it taken me so long to discover your fanfiction? YOU ARE AWESOME.

Thanks! I love writing badass!John...

Dude, dude, dude this is so awesome! I was a little wary of reading this in the beginning because I though it was going to be all angst and woe and I don't really -do- angst and woe. But it's not! It's all awesome John and Athena badassery spy-thriller style.
This was my favorite line:
'Two shots roared out, so close together they were almost the same sound.'

It's just got some really great auditory visuals.

Thanks! And the spy-thriller type of story is exactly what I'm going for!

So exciting! These two make a good team!

Awesome chapter and awesome fic. Can't wait for more!

loving this, and can't wait for those who thought they'd gone rogue to eat crow - especially mycroft.

*grumble*services rendered indeed*grumble*

Methinks he's going to have to do some serious groveling. And I can' twait for Moriarty to go and rub it in, because he cn't help himself like that.

Thanks! And reconciliation definitely won't be easy...not after this...

Oh, I do want more of this thrilling tale!

I really can see this pair saving their men from Moriarty and clearing their names--no Mary Sue/Marty Stu-ness in my opinion. The are both kick-as in canon.

Good portrayal of their reactions to each other in their scenes together, too. I see their camaraderie turning into real friendship during/after this trial by fire, which makes me giggle for the future way they will have Mycroft and Sherlock at their knees.

Thanks! I love writing badass!John and I'm having just as much fun with Anthea. Because really, no one remotely normal could ever keep up with the Holmes brothers...

Apparently Mycroft had given Anthea a day's head start...Sherlock couldn't even do that.

---that must've been like a dagger to the gut for John *woobie*


I got a chuckle over Anthea saying if she didn't know better she'd think John was a dark wizard (over his sharpshooter skills). Love how they impress each other!

Thanks! I'm enjoying writing John and Anthea feeling each other out - after all, even though they're in the same predicament, they don't actually know each other very well.

Can't believe I missed this update!
Don't take this the wrong way, but I hope this fic doesn't turn out to be very long. I need to know how it ends! But I can be patient...sometimes. Well, on to chapter 3!

Thanks! I;m sorry to say that I have no idea how long this fic will be - but I HAVE planned everything out from start to finish. Now it's just a matter of writing in the gaps...

Okay, this is one of the most brilliant stories running right now (another on the top of my list is your His Dark Materials crossover, btw), so props to you for utter awesomeness. I'm rereading this and others of your work right now, and I just realized why this chapter is so fantastic.

Not only do you have BAMF!John and BAMF!NotAnthea, super spies and fugitives from the law and Mycroft, but I just remembered that they did all of this while dressed as a mild-mannered computer technician and her dottering GRANDFATHER.

Please. Someone draw this. With John having a graying fake mustache.

Thanks! I got the mental image of them being badass while dressed up as the most mild-mannered people ever, and knew I just HAD to do something with that...

Dark Wizard? Loved it! Loved it before that, but that line just made everything better! :)