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Sherlock Fic - Reaction
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Title: Reaction
Rating: R/NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Non-con and slash.
Summary: Written for a prompt on the kinkmeme: Before shoving him in the explosive vest, Moriarty fucked John, viciously. John makes it through the whole encounter with Moriarty and Homles via his own badass soldier nerves of steel, but afterwards, when he and Sherlock are admitted to the hospital for minor burns and abrasions and shock, the hospital staff find other injuries on John.



(Title page by [info]birddi)

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Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight
Part Nine
Part Ten
Part Eleven
Part Twelve



This is excellent! Very well written. There are very few good rape fics out there (some are so cringe worthy and OC), but this one is great. I think you've got John's reaction to this perfectly. He's trying to act calm and stay in control, but once he realizes how HELPLESS he is (I especially love your description of him as a butterfly on a card), he starts freaking. And that last sentence: POOR JOHN. </3 PLEASE update soon, I need to know how John's reaction will be in the aftermath, and Sherlock's when he finds out.

Thanks! I could see John trying to keep himself under control, trying to stay detached and calmly evaluate the situation, but eventually realising there's no way to stay detached in the face of what Moriarty's going to do to him.

I love the psychology going on back and forth. Wow.

Oh, this is NOT the first thing you've written - is it? Wow.

John's thoughts are absolutely perfect here, he gets Moriarty very well (which doesn't really help him, unfortunately). Very good, and very disturbing.

Even more disturbing is having to wait for the next part!

This is my first fanfic, yes, and the first story I've let loose on the world, which is why I was so nervous about it.

And there'll be more to come soon!

Great start! Can't wait for more!

This is so detailed. I can't believe it's the first thing that you written. You've really pinned down both characters. John's training, his fear, his knowledge that he's helpless and he knows that he needs to relax for it not to hurt as badly, but he can't.

Poor John...
I love your way in narration of John's thoughts. Since this is before the pool scene, seems John could not be saved from all these. Now I'll climbing to Part II...

Wow! So terrifying. Poor poor John. This is very well written. On to the next part. :)

This is really great and powerful. I really like it.

Poor John. I really like this fic. I feel so sorry for him.

*eep* Hang in there, John!

Great opening chapter- very intense. I liked your characterisation of John; that military mindset coming into play to analyse and strategise. He spotted some useful information about Moriarty, which will hopefully come in useful against the man later on. I feel like John should get something good out of his current situation, even if it is only a better understanding of what makes Moriarty tick- not much of a plus point for the whole lot of minus points he's currently enduring, but at least it's something.

Laura.

OMFG! POOR JOHN! T_____T
I so wanna kill Moriarty right now!

But, anyway! you use the characters very well! and explained how john's minds can function when he is in danger.. like the militar that he is!!!

Great fic!

As promised, comment for Part 1. I've toyed with this idea a little myself, especially since we have no idea exactly what happened to John after he left the flat and before the pool. Interesting take on it, and your Moriarty is very cruel and sadistic and bloodthirsty and creepy. Well done