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Sherlock Fic - The Republic of Heaven, Part Three (contd.)
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Title: The Republic of Heaven
Rating: Maybe PG-13?  At least at the moment...
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Eventual slash, Sherlock/John.
Summary: HDM AU.  Sherlock and Raniel investigate what appear to be serial suicides, with John and Amarisa along for the ride.

(Title page by birddi )

Part One: The Architecture of Our Lives
Part Two: Stepping Stones
Part Three: Foundations

Part Three: Foundations (contd.)Collapse )

Completely awesome. TY so much for updating. Can't wait for you to write more. This is such a treat. I just love the daemon interaction. This fandom is great to write in. About time someone did one for Sherlock. Stupendous work. Would love to wrote one in this verse for this show but yours is just to perfect. no one could catch it like you. PLease keep writing.

Re: This is christmas!

Thanks! I loved writing the dæmons - they're just so much fun!

Yay! This is so very awesome. I was ecstatic when I saw the update and now I've gone and read it, and it is wonderful! I love that everyone but John is surprised by Sherlock's daemon's behavior, including Sherlock. I wonder what Mycroft thinks? Keep writing. mg

Thanks! I loved writing Raniel for this chapter - I can see him being very obviously smitten with Amarisa, while she's a little more subtle about it.

Adored, especially Raniel and Amarisa.

Thanks! And I looked forward to writing this chapter for ages, just for the dæmon interaction!

I'm really loving this! The interaction between Sherlock and John, Amarisa and Raniel was wonderful. I can't wait to see Sherlock's reaction when he realizes John was with his mom, and John's reaction when he realizes Sherlock is her son!

This was brilliant, thanks! Can't wait for more!

Thanks! I loved writing actual interaction between them at last, especially their dæmons.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS SO GOOD, i love it. :D every update is exciting!

Thanks! Hopefully, the next chapter will be up soon!

This is so awesome. I love everything about how they are together. Raniel touching his nose to Amarisa's to say sorry was so adorable! I love Sherlock's complete disregard for the propriety around Amarisa and his total enthusiasm for her uniqueness. Perfectly in character.


Thanks! I love writing Raniel-Amarisa interaction!

ACK. Need more. Stat.
Lovely, nicely integrated narrative, and I'm really finding that the daemon interaction is making things very, very interesting.

Thanks! I love writing dæmon interaction - I always thought they'd be much more obvious about their feelings than humans.

i was desperately hoping for more of this, and this was such a thrilling fulfillment of my wishes!

i adore every part of this, especially the honest interactions freed from social conventions between the 4 of them.

and the anticipation about how long it will take for the news about Mummy to come to light, ahh, it's fantastic.

i can't tell you how astounded and impressed i am by your blending of the 'verses and how enthusiastic i am in hoping for more.

thanks so very much for writing this exceptional piece.

Thanks! I was really looking forward to writing this chapter, purely because of the Sherlock-Raniel/John-Amarisa interactions.

What's really impressed me about this fic is how you've kept to the series plot line, but you haven't made it a retelling of events with daemons stuck in there. It's a new perspective on John and Sherlock's relationship.

I really love this. Can't wait to see how you'll continue!

Thanks! I tried to just give a basic run-down of events, and only include the scenes where a dæmon's presence would have changed things.

oh goodness, this is WONDERFUL. I so love Pullman's concept of daemons and its so great to see it so well applied to Sherlock and John. The analysis of John/Amarisa's character traits is so cool!! And Raniel's interactions with Amarisa soo sweet =) Can't wait to read more!!

Thanks! I loved writing the dæmon interactions - I can picture them being much more obviously smitten with each other than their humans are.

So I've been devouring your writing like a starving man falls on a feast and I feel really terrible that I've not yet even thanked you for sharing this fucking bounty of amazingness.

I can't decide which ones I love best, but there's something about The Republic of Heaven that really tugs at me. Maybe it's the way you've made Amarisa and Raniel so real: I can practically superimpose them onto the screen when I rewatch the show and it all fits. Maybe it's the way that Sherlock and John are just so right on, character wise, but with enough of a twist to fit this particular universe. Maybe it's just because you are just that awesome.

ANYWAY, tl;dr: You are amazeballs and I love your work and thank you so much for sharing.

Thanks! I must admit, I'm having a lot more fun writing this story than I did my other chapter fic. Though that may be because Reaction dealt with a pretty dark topic, while this is much more light-hearted.

This is quickly becoming my favorite HDM AU fic. :D

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Thanks! I must admit I love writing in this verse - it's so much fun!

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK i love this so much lol. can't wait for more! :D

Thanks! Hopefully another chapter will be up soon!