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Sherlock Fic - Reaction, Part Nine
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Title: Reaction
Rating: R/NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Non-con and slash, Sherlock/John.
Summary: Written for a prompt on the kinkmeme: Before shoving him in the explosive vest, Moriarty fucked John, viciously. John makes it through the whole encounter with Moriarty and Homles via his own badass soldier nerves of steel, but afterwards, when he and Sherlock are admitted to the hospital for minor burns and abrasions and shock, the hospital staff find other injuries on John.

(Title page by [info]birddi)

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight


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Part Ten
Part Eleven
Part Twelve

This is way too close for comfort. I wish I'd seen what John did about his and Sarah's relationship - that it wasn't strong enough yet to survive. Might have saved some heartache. John's reactions are so real and in many ways so familiar. I envy him Sherlock and I want to cry for the pain and the healing yet to come.

I'm glad you think this is realistic - I'm trying hard for that.

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*gnaws fic*
This is everything angst should be. ^.^

Thanks! I'm trying not to drown the story in angst (even if the subject is pretty angsty all by itself...)

This. All of this. Is Awesome.

And I mean that in both senses of the word.

I'm just so sad when it comes to the end of a chapter,...I wish I could read more! really amazing as ever.

Thanks! Next chapter should be up soon!

My heart is melting... Never thought words, simply words could be so powerful. Marvelous! Longing for MORE!!!

This is just so well-written - I'm very much looking forward to the next installment.

Thanks! Next part should be up soon!

Oh my lord, the emotion! It's killing me, I love it. I keep hoping that this is the chapter when Moriarty gets what's coming to him, but I'm enjoying the meantime.

Agh, so tense!

I can't get enough of this story.

Looking forward to more...

Awww John :(. This was an excellent chapter. I loved both povs.

Poor John; he's going to be seeing Moriarty for awhile, I think. Though not as often as he might have now Sherlock knows what to look for.

I'm really enjoying Sherlock's struggle to deal with these irrational feelings he has towards John. I love the way he wants to hold John close and protect him from the world, yet understands that John might react badly to being held.

I wonder if he would react badly, though. John sees Sherlock as safety and home. He willingly all but hugged him and felt safe with Sherlock walking closer to him. So would he panic if Sherlock gave into the impulse to hug him?

I'm glad to see a return of snarky Sherlock. I liked that he was so solicitous of John, but John just wanted some semblance of normal in his spiralling life, so I'm pleased Sherlock got that.

Looking forward to the next chapter...


I just love how in this chapter something happened that John thought about in chapter three:
He wanted to rest his head against Sherlock's chest and close his eyes and just let everything disappear for a while...

I'm coming by daily checking for updates and I really, really like the way you're handling this sensitive subject.

Egads, that was lovely. I teared up a little and even hid under my coat a few times to try and digest what was being said.

Oh my god, just...oh my god. I have no idea what I liked best about this chapter/update/part. It was, wow. I'm loving the views into their heads, you have the both mastered. And it's slowly destroying me with amazing brilliance