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Sherlock Fic - Reaction, Part Nine
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Title: Reaction
Rating: R/NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Non-con and slash, Sherlock/John.
Summary: Written for a prompt on the kinkmeme: Before shoving him in the explosive vest, Moriarty fucked John, viciously. John makes it through the whole encounter with Moriarty and Homles via his own badass soldier nerves of steel, but afterwards, when he and Sherlock are admitted to the hospital for minor burns and abrasions and shock, the hospital staff find other injuries on John.

(Title page by [info]birddi)

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight


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Part Ten
Part Eleven
Part Twelve

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Delurking myself too. I usually don't read non-con fics, not my cuppa of tea. But someone recced this story for me and I thought I'd try it, skipping the first chapter. Later I re-read the story from the start. It's dark and angsty, but oh my, the characterisation and the psychology behind it is just wonderful. Every new chapter is wonderful. I adore how IC you keep the characters despite all the hardship. You broke them but they can be repaired. Awww... this is going to my delicious and to the rec page. Thanks for the story so far and keep going.

Thanks! I try to keep everyone as IC as possible, given the circumstances...

Yet another delurker~

I've been following this for a while, but I'm terrible with commenting >.>

I love this story. You've managed to deal with a really difficult subject matter rather eloquently and without making John's rape out to be something that is made all better by a fluffy reunion with Sherlock.

Essentially, what I'm trying to say is this is realistic and well-written and I have a lot of love for it.

Thanks! I try to keep it as realistic as possible, in that there's not going to any magic fix-it.

So he leaned forward, pressed his forehead against Sherlock's collarbone, steadied himself with his hands on the taller man's hips, and just breathed.

Really sweet scene! i just can imagine them on a cold winter..
i love the way you are developing their relationship!
and how they are walking in circles around each other!
really great fic!!!
looking foward for more!

I've read this through to the end of this chapter. You've no idea how sad I am that I've run out of chapters.
Don't know what your writing schedule is but hope there's more soon. Am enjoying this way too much considering its dark nature.

Thanks! And I'm trying to write fairly frequently, so the next chapter should be up soon!

Continue to absolutely love this; I squee each time there's a new instalment, thank you!

Another grwat chapter! I really like how you wrote John's freak out, so well done and very realistic

I really can't say anything new here, but I have so much love for this fic! I check every day for updates (sometimes more than once, I'm a wee bit sad :p) and this one was excellent. I love the split perspective, seeing things from both of their viewpoints is very cool. I feel the need to say, again, how wonderfully IC all of this is too, you've really captured their voices. :) Particularly during John's panic attack, very nicely handled.

Do you know how many chapters we might see yet? I'm nervous that the end is going to suddenly appear, and I'll be sad :p

Thanks. I'm not sure how many chapter there'll be, but rest assured I'll try to end on a high note (comparitively).

Whew, great chapter. Love this line/idea:

"Yes, that was a good word for it, even if the concept didn't particularly make sense – John smelled reassuring."

Thanks! I could picture Sherlock trying to categorise everything about John, even the way he smells :D

Two things I generally don't have a taste for: rape and stories specifically dealing with post-Great Game. However I must say I'm very glad I took the chance in reading this, it's very well done, and the characterization of everyone, especially John is just lovely. I do hope you write more to this soon, I can't wait to see how this all turns out. Excellent job!

Re: My Dear Friend : )

Thanks! I try to keep everyone as in-character as possible!

This fic and Dexter are the reasons I look forward to Mondays instead of dreading them. This chapter was absolutely brilliant. If I could pick out one part especially, I loved john's quip about not feeling like his masculinity was threatened because of the flowers. I think this is a small but significant factor that will aid in his recovery - while far from OK, he isn't feeling like "less of a man" (whatever that means).

Thank you! I can see John as being a very adjusted kind of guy :D

eahhh.. so heartbreaking
sad and very promissing chap - i love how u described Sherlock's feeling - espetially this line - Known the way Sherlock listened carefully every time John laughed, wanting to categorise the different cadences and nuances of that sound? very-very-very good

Thanks! I could just picture Sherlock having an obsessive need to categorise and quantify everything about John.

This chapter is really good. Your characterizations are impressively complex and feel true to how the people on screen might be if confronted with this situation.

How much do I love John Watson for this line?

“I was in the army, I shoot like a sniper, and I played rugby in spite of being the smallest guy on the field – at this point, you can't make me insecure about my masculinity just because I like flowers.”

A whole damn lot, that's how much, for this and so much more. Sherlock is also great, figuring out how to be there for John in a way that isn't smothering and finally opening up about the phone.

Thanks! I can picture John as an adjusted kind of guy, you know?