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Sherlock Fic - Reaction, Part Six
colourful, hills
Title: Reaction
Rating: R/NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Non-con and slash.
Summary: Written for a prompt on the kinkmeme: Before shoving him in the explosive vest, Moriarty fucked John, viciously. John makes it through the whole encounter with Moriarty and Homles via his own badass soldier nerves of steel, but afterwards, when he and Sherlock are admitted to the hospital for minor burns and abrasions and shock, the hospital staff find other injuries on John.

(Title page by [info]birddi)

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five

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Part Seven
Part Eight
Part Nine
Part Ten
Part Eleven
Part Twelve

This is beautifully written. It feels real. I am very sensitive to characterization - something _always_ seems a little off to me in fanfic, and actually a fair portion of the time in canon, too - and yet this, while having characters behave in fashions they never have canonically, still feels right. The behavior feels fully justified.

One ridiculously small nitpick to set against the gorgeous background that is this fic - iPhones don't break like that, certainly not if they are in cases of the variety of the pink one. Throwing it against the wall wouldn't even leave a dent, and I very much doubt Sherlock could do anything with his heel, either. I've driven over one with a car, stepped on one with a horse, and other similar things and it didn't even notice. They are extremely persistent little buggers. I know it sounds like a silly complaint, but it's just that given a story which is otherwise perfect in every way, the one inaccuracy is far more noticeable to me than it would be otherwise.

So, in conclusion, I love this story, in an "Oh, John... Oh, Sherlock..." sort of way. You are a spectacular writer.

Just masterful...I'm going to run out of ways to compliment you soon. It's just phenomenal. Truly.