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Sherlock Fic - Reaction, Part Five
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Title: Reaction
Rating: R/NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Non-con and slash, Sherlock/John leanings.
Summary: Written for a prompt on the kinkmeme: Before shoving him in the explosive vest, Moriarty fucked John, viciously. John makes it through the whole encounter with Moriarty and Holmes via his own badass soldier nerves of steel, but afterwards, when he and Sherlock are admitted to the hospital for minor burns and abrasions and shock, the hospital staff find other injuries on John.

(Title page by [info]birddi)

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four


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Part Six

Part Seven
Part Eight
Part Nine
Part Ten
Part Eleven
Part Twelve

Gritty stuff but well worth while. Thank you for updating.

I need a TARDIS to go forward in time to the posting of the next part. Or, you know, when it's complete so I can find out right now what's going to happen. ARGH I'm loving it!

The uses for a TARDIS are truly too many to be named - be sure to tell me when one's invented :D

The writing of this is amazing! Spot-on characterisations - absolutely heartbreaking. I am in awe.

Thanks so much for looking it over! And I'll be sending you the next part as soon as it's done!

oh yes, part 5 is coming~~~

mark first and reading now~~~!!!

Re: oh yes, part 5 is coming~~~


that was well done. not an easy subject to write about too. I feel anxious to get to the 'healing' part either, too much realistic pain in this chapter.

Thanks. I try to keep it somewhat realistic, so I'm afraid there'll be more angst to come...

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Thanks! Next chapter should be up soon!

i want to say awwww at the last bit and then poor john...! excellent update :)

eagerly awaiting next chapter!! very good update--intense. poor john.

Thanks! Next part should be up soon!

He reached forward automatically, his fingers brushing the back of John's hand in an instinctive attempt to ease the tension there. John flinched, and Sherlock made to withdraw, but in the next instant John's hand was tightly clenched around his.
This paragraph hit me suddenly……I love their reactions.I could see how much Sherlock cares about John and how much John needs Sherlock by his side though this paragraph,and that really made me want to cry……
I love this chapter!Yes it's heartbreakingly brilliant!
Hope my poor English can express all my love to you!T v T

Thanks! And yes, the poor boys are certainly going to need each other for what's to come...

I love this story so much, painful as it is to read. It feels real and raw and but it's amazingly written and it gets better every chapter. I get so excited whenever I see you've updated. I love this. ♥♥♥

Thanks! Next part should be up soon!

This is insanely good. To the point that it's rather like a punch in the gut to read. It's visceral, and raw, and very, very believable. And, being the glutton for punishment that I invariably am, I am completely addicted. I honestly cannot wait to read more of this, and see where it goes.

...can John please punch Mycroft at some point?

Thanks! As to the punching Mycroft...wait and see.

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Thanks! Next part should be up soon.

Awww John, giving his statement, reliving all the trauma, was not an easy thing to do, but, typical John, he didn't spare himself any of it, giving every last detail of pain and humiliation as calmly as he could. I'm glad he let Sherlock stay and that Sherlock was able to offer some small comfort.

I also think that being able to worry about Sherlock helped John keepm his mind off his own pain to some extent, whether that's what Sherlock intended or not.


i'm happy for you that u have a beta now!
i soooo in love with this fic
your writtin is awesome!!! u just described very well the tension!
and poor john! T_T
i hope Moriarty dies a painfull death! really! =X