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The Republic of Heaven, Part Ten (contd.)
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Title: The Republic of Heaven
Rating: Probably PG-13 for this bit
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Slash, mention of sex in this part
Pairings: Sherlock/John.
Summary: HDM AU.  Two visitors calls on Baker Street and another aspect of John and Amarisa's sensitivity is revealed...

(Title page by birddi )

Part One: The Architecture of Our Lives
Part Two: Stepping Stones
Part Three: Foundations
Part Four: Shadowed Archways
Part Five: Buried Labyrinths
Part Six: Crossing The River
Part Seven: Glimmers in Darkness
Part Eight: Perdition's Bridges
Part Nine: Building The Republic
Part Ten: Lit From Within


Part Ten: Lit From Within(contd.)Collapse )


Part Eleven: Structrual Integrity
Part Twelve: The Reader

ohhh!!!!! this is just great!!!!!!!!!!
and ... and... fantastic
ohh John - so sweet not knowing=realising what he is worth of))))^___^

Thanks! I picture John as being very oblivious to how amazing he is...

I've been following this story so avidly, but I can't remember if I've commented before. It is absolutely lovely.

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I love writing John as this amazing guy who is completely oblivious to how special he is. Because really, that's how he seems, you know?

John is so wonderfully adorable! With the hugs, and the 'never had permission before' and the utter obliviousness about the witch and her daemon, and the picture of a sensitive. He is one cute, cuddly and yet so deadly jumper-wearing BAMF.

Thanks! I picture John as just being totally oblivious to how amazing he is...

yay John, wonderful self-effacing and miraculous John. Thanks for posting this lovely update.

"What went wrong?"

A lens flare, obviously! What did you think it was?! 9_9 Oooh, John~ I rolled my eyes so hard, I got a headache, and then giggled maddly to myself until my dog looked at me weird.

I picture John as just being totally oblivious to how amazing he is...

Oh John, so many people falling at your feet and you don't even realize it. ♥ What a wonderful long-awaited update to this brilliant epic! I love how you alternate between John and Sherlock's POV - it's great to get both sides of the story. Their love is so beautiful to witness, and I always love seeing Mycroft and Anthea involved. ♥ The Holmes family dinner with Mummy will be so interesting hahahaha ♥ I'm so intrigued with the new developments, especially with John being such a strong sensitive. I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Thanks! I had to wait such a long time to reveal Hasna and Caedmon's infatuation - because of course, John was never going to realise it.

Another wonderful chapter as usual. I wonder how many other infatuated people and their dæmon's John and Risa have left in their wake!!

:: stage whispers :: I'm a little (alot) in love with them myself :: sigh ::

I know, right? John's just so adorable...

Oh John. It's a good thing your humility is part of your charm.

Even though not a lot actually happens in this chap, I still love it to death. Sherlock & John are absolutely adorable together. :) I love seeing how affectionate they both are.

Thanks! I loved writing this fluffy morning-after.

And the epic tale just keep getting better, this is so sweet and life-confirming that I just don't have words to describe it. I have already read it twice, and believe that this is going to turn into one of those stories that you just keep going back to. I am so glad I read the review and decided to check it out!

Many, many thanks for sharing this with the rest of us!

yays an update! I can't wait for more, and I love how oblivious John is to some things. He reminds me of Haruhi from Ouran High...so totally practical and possibly the most unique, but also just so normal and out-of-touch with the sheer amount of WIN they are.

The last line was full of win as well, and I can't wait for the dinner-date clan get together. Made less awkward by already knowing the mother and being friends with just about all of the clan :D

Thanks! I picture John as just being totally oblivious to how special he is...

I love you and I love John. Now I must run to hand in a paper. I'm also so happy you've updated!

This is awesome and wonderful. Oh John sweetie ♥.

God, this story is adorable. John is especially adorable. I can concur with Sherlock sometimes thinking he's stupid, haha. Also Raniel and Amarisa and Sherlock are adorable. Okay, I have nothing constructive to say so Ima just go back over here and continue squeeing. :-D


Thanks! Adorable is exactly what I was going for :D

I'm always excited to see an update. I love this post-getting together Sherlock and John, how comfortable they are with touching, Sherlock's (and John's) insecurities... I had a feeling John's picture would eclipse the previous ones. John is so clueless to his own awesomeness, I loved his 'what went wrong?'

Thanks! I loved writing this fluffy morning-after bit...