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The Republic of Heaven, Part Nine (contd.)
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Title: The Republic of Heaven
Rating: NC-17 for this bit, just to be on the safe side
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Slash, Sherlock/John.
Summary: HDM AU.  In the aftermath of their confrontation with Moriarty, Sherlock and Raniel finally make their move...

(Title page by [info]birddi )

Part One: The Architecture of Our Lives
Part Two: Stepping Stones
Part Three: Foundations
Part Four: Shadowed Archways
Part Five: Buried Labyrinths
Part Six: Crossing The River
Part Seven: Glimmers in Darkness
Part Eight: Perdition's Bridges
Part Nine: Building The Republic
 
Part Nine: Building The Republic (contd.)Collapse )

Part Ten: Lit From Within
Part Eleven: Structrual Integrity
Part Twelve: The Reader


You are incredible, seriously! You have such a way with words! The sex scene was brilliant. I love how you stayed in Sherlock's head, by which I mean that he still observed even while he was giving John a blowjob. Great! I love all those little things he observed like how John's hair feels sort of similar to Amarisa's fur.

And what I liked even more than the sex scene itself is the feeling throughout everything actually since they came home. The way this chapter ends on all the contentment and loveliness makes me forgive you for all those evil, evil cliffhangers that came before ;P
But seriously, I can actually lose myself in your stories. All the feelings you describe come across so incredibly well. It's fantastic and amazing and I love you. &hearts

Thanks! And I picture Sherlock as the type to never really 'turn off' you know? He'd still be observing and thinking a mile a minute during sex, only those thoughts would be about John as opposed to...well, anything else, really.

ALKJHSLKAJHDLKAJH SO GOOD!!!! The daemon-touching bit was amazing. As was the sexing.

“Everyone wants cuddles,” John muttered, his eyes already closing. “Scientific fact – look it up.”

TRUE STORY.

Thanks! John Watson is a man's man, the kind who asks for cuddles if he wants them!

damn it)) it's like cristmas)))
great chap)) and great really hot sex scene))thanks))))))

I don’t think I could love a fic more than I do this one. This last chapter is almost so utterly and beautifully perfect I almost want to imagine it ends right here. They’re so happy and peaceful. *sigh*

Have to agree with the other comments that the cuddle line is adorable beyond words.

Thanks! And John Watson is a man's man! The kind who asks for cuddles if he wants them!

If I could be rolling around on the floor in joy at a place of business, I would be - and I'm not even all the way finished.

Continued excellent characterization and writing; honestly the best HDM crossover I've read.

*massive squee of doom*

*flails*

*squee some more*

OMG Such a fantastic chapter!! And at long last, they're together! YAY!

I love every single line of it, and the daemon-touching part was everything one could hope for and more, gorgeous and so intense... Wonderful ^__^
And this was the first time you wrote a sex scene? Because it was utterly perfect, both very very hot, sweet and tender. BTW I hope there will be more in a not-so-distant future :P

Thank you so much for sharing, it really made my day!

PS: Would you mind if I friended you?

Thanks! Mt beta really helped out with the sex scene...

And please, feel free to friend me!

YES!!!

What more is there to say? Tha was absolutely brilliant, lovely, wonderfully heart warming.

It's what we've all been waiting for and you didn't disappoint.

I can go to bed a happy girl.

:: Snoopy dancing all the way to bed.....::

Oh god I love this! I had been waiting for this for so long and you not only did not disappoint, but you went and wrote something even better than I could have imagined.

I can't wait to read more!!!

:D

That's pretty much all I have to say about that.

Also, kudos to you for writing sex-with-daemons. While I've enjoyed writing HDM crossovers in the past, I think I always hit some sort of brain melt with trying to write an actual sex scene (as opposed to glazing over the act). I'm not sure if it was just a personal issue or not, but if you struggled through--well, it doesn't show, because this is AWESOME?

Anyway, yes. You continue to amaze with this! Can't wait for part ten.

Thanks! And my beta really helped me out with the sex scene :D

Wow! The daemon-touching scene was gorgeous and so intense. I love it utterly. Then there was hot sex and John giggling at getting things out of order, and it was all marvelous.

My only regret is that I've now reached the end of what's already posted and have to wait for more.

Thanks! I was trying for the dæmon-touching to be the most intense part of the chapter - because in this universe, it's the real intimacy, you know?

I honestly think the deamon touching was more intense than the sex scene. Which was really hot so that's saying something!

As always, thank you for sharing this, it's the fic I read and then re-read all over again and it makes me check my flist 3 times a day for updates! &hearts

Thanks! And I was trying to make the dæmon-touching the most intense part :D

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Thanks! And my beta really helped me out with the sex scene :D

I was so glad to see this chapter. I finished reading the last one and developed an irrational fear that you would stop with the end of episode three. I've got to agree with everyone about Raniel and Amarisa and John and Sherlock and the petting session. Pure awesome. I can't wait to see how the plot develops now that you have passed the end of the episodes and I have no idea what's coming next.

Thanks! And as you can see, I always had plans to continue this story well beyond the series - I have too many plot points not to!

some people like to skip to the moment when the main characters get together, but without the build up to this point the utter glory of that moment would not have had the punch. The intensity you've captured here was unrivaled and this is one of the best things I've had the pleasure of reading in some time.

Thanks! My beta really helped me out with the sex scene...