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Sherlock Fic - The Republic of Heaven, Part Eight (contd.)
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Title: The Republic of Heaven
Rating: Might be verging into M (15+)
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, and am making no profit from their use, more's the pity.
Warnings: Eventual slash, Sherlock/John.
Summary: HDM AU.  John and Amarisa resign themselves as Sherlock and Raniel delight in matching wits with the bomber, but the confrontation at the pool doesn't go as planned...

(Title page by birddi )

Part One: The Architecture of Our Lives
Part Two: Stepping Stones
Part Three: Foundations
Part Four: Shadowed Archways
Part Five: Buried Labyrinths
Part Six: Crossing The River
Part Seven: Glimmers In Darkness
Part Eight: Perdition's Bridges

Part Eight: Perdition's Bridges (contd.)Collapse )Part Twelve: The ReaderPart Eight: Perdition's Bridges (contd.)Collapse )

held my breath here!!!
but i still think the profecy is for john.. or no?
soooooooooooooo wanna see more!!!
every time i read this, i wanna more!!!
hope Sherlock see his feelings soon! >_<

Thanks! And the prophecy is meant to encourage speculation :D

Amarisa was the only one who spoke, in a statement no less crass than it was a neat summary of the situation.

“Well, shit!”

^Neat summary indeed. At least we won't have to wait long for the next part!

Thanks! Amarisa tends to be fairly blunter than John, so I couldn't resist giving her that line :D

As everyone else says... ARGH, a cliffhanger more agonizing than the actual show!

Great work! :D

Thanks! And yes, I'm aware my cliffhangers are nothing less than completely evil :D

I've only recently discovered your work and would like to applaud you on a WIP that's stunning in its complexity, accurate in characterization and a completely brilliant crossover. Seeing as I love a good crossover, bravo!

I look forward to the next chapter!

I have to admit that this is the same thought I had about the prophecy, that John is the catlyst for it, even though the description is more Sherlock.

This chapter is only a continuation of the greatness of this story. When Moriarty touched Amarisa, I want to kill him, only Sherlock and Raniel can touch John and Amarisa. A cliffhanger, how cruel of you. I'll simply have to read this from the beginning until another chapter is posted. You never know what you might have missed.

Thanks! And the prophecy is meant to encourage speculation :D

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update!!!!!!!!!!

Amarisa was the only one who spoke, in a statement no less crass than it was a neat summary of the situation.

“Well, shit!”

Thank you Amarisa for accurately summarizing the universal response to the pool scene cliffhanger in both canon and this story. The Sherlock POV in this section was great. Off to read the next chapter!

Thanks! I've always wanted to write Sherlock POV of the pool scene - and I got my chance, under the excuse of furthering my story, no less!

"“Stop it!” Raniel cried, his voice thin and brittle." YES, STOP IT!! Would you believe if I told you that reading Jim touching Amarisa was one of the ... worst things I've read? I mean, it is John's soul! I'm used to read things (not fanfics) about real life people, violations of every kinds, but this... I think the fault is the connotation I give to the context. It was cruel of Jim to do that! (And the award for the best writter goes to you xD)

I LOVED that even If John was the responsable for everything, our dear Sherlock would try to help him! *sings "Love is in the air"...*